Through Day and Night
Sunrise, sunset, poetry is alive throughout the day,
The night, and present in all seasons, for years lingering on
like a haze of fog long after all others have left to go
somewhere alone, in two, in company or in tune with time.
hf 23.9.2004
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Coming Suddenly to the Sea
Coming suddenly to the sea in my twenty-eighth year,
to the mother of all things that breathe, of mussels and whales,
I could not see anything but sand at first
and burning bits of mother-of-pearl.
But this was the sea, terrible as a torch
which the winter sun had lit,
flaming in the blue and salt sea-air
under my twenty-eight-year infant eyes.
And then I saw the spray smashing the rocks
and the angry gulls cutting the air,
the heads of fish and the hands of crabs on stones:
the carnivorous sea, sower of life,
battering a granite rock to make it a pebble—
love and pity needless as the ferny froth on its long smooth waves.
The sea, with its border of crinkly weed,
the inverted Atlantic of our unstable planet,
froze me into a circle of marble, sending the icy air out in
lukewarm waves.
And so I brought home, as an emblem of that day
ending my long blind years, a fistful of blood-red weed in my hand.
from “New Music” (Section 4), Dudek’s Collected Poetry
Coming up for air
By Hatto Fischer
Thin blue veils cover the faces
Of the fishermen
As water runs down their chins
And then drips on ropes
Running to shores
Where sunshine dries pebbles
During the long day of work
While at night and heavy breathing
Night dreams awake to hear
Waves laugh along the shore
To the tune of the moon
Saying in a half darkened voice:
No one there, no one there
To play with the winds
Until the children come,
Ready to suddenly dive
Off high rocks
To the fishes
Coming up for air
Comparing two poems
“Once the tourists leave, then they give back the beaches to the winds”
– Seferis
Two poems, two different junctures in time as entry to a reflection about poetry close to the physis: nature, but also to the lawfulness man can deduce out of observations of nature.
Parmenides made such an observation: while the chariot was taking the man out of the city, the axel turned so fast in the hole of the wheels, that they began to smoke. Physical resistance could not be described in any other formal way. Poets make these observations out of everyday happenings. They detect a discrepancy between what is taking place, physically speaking, and what can be named in a language understood by mankind.
There is the universe and no one ever tried to toss a pebble into that direction, but into the sea. Stones sink, but pebbles if thrown artfully can skip, run, jump over waves and then dive elegantly or else take a nose dive. It all depends on the angles and surfaces of the rock thrown since like airplanes and birds they can sail or else block themselves out of the thin air needed to be divided before getting through.
But to come back to Parmenides and his observation, Thomas Kuhn wrote that the modern technical development lets us no longer observe transformation of energy as the case with the locomotive when instead a high speed train lets but a spark of electricity become visible as it speeds along the rails. London – Paris through the tunnel is now within a simple reach, Paris and Brussels even closer.
When it comes to observing things, there is the thesis by Martin Jay that the twentieth century has undergone a ‘disenchantment of the eye’. The debate whether the whole or the parts should be observed, that is just a reflection of certain political theories going out of date. They disputed about determining life through the whole or through parts, but in any case, eyes, sights, perceptions and elongations thereof through a looking glass or a magical eye like in Alice in Wonderland became just that: a metaphor of what man can see in a world to be travelled around at ever higher speeds until satellites replace the human eye and still make observations possible.
Poetry gathers ways of finding ways through danger zones and through an abyss of feeling to be no longer in tune with the world.
To give an understanding of the poem by Dudek, then it is important that he ends up holding in his hand ‘a fistful of blood-red weed’.
If man returns from the sea, or from a voyage, what does he hold in his hands? Odyssey described Homer as Homer invented Odyssey when returning home without anything in his hands but with a thought as to what would be the wisest decision once again ashore: to sleep close to the sea but risk the cold during the night or else to seek shelter in the forest where it is warm but then risk wild animals. Odyssey decides to leave the beach and his decision is rewarded by finding a special olive tree which is composed of two parts: a wild one, and a civilized one. Together they offer so much shade and protection that easily three men could house underneath its branches forming a shelter. There Odyssey sleeps and recovers from having been tossed into the sea and then washed ashore more than just exhausted.
Home coming is like coming up for air.
In Dudek’s poem what strikes most is this metaphor of ‘circle of marble’ as if a linkage to the Mediterranean sea, but now it is the Atlantic with its icy winds and long spells of hardships that only the nature of the North knows to impose upon mankind.
If not a stumble or a humble around Halifax or the Maine state, then it is a part of the world where the philosophy belongs to the ‘screaming owl’ coming down from Yukon when going South, and to the many birds travelling with the geese North once summer comes again.
Over and again the glance of such natural phenomenon is filled with wonder. Still, the proportion of man’s dwellings to what the animals can still claim as their untouched nature is no more than a ruffle in the feathers.
Here begins the narrow road to infinity that anyone senses once touching the feathers that birds have left behind once they take off from the beach.
Circles of marbles – a symbolic perfection of the perfect, or as if life is the infinitive if a derivative of the derivate, the life of the life of others all longing for life. That then is no longer simple but a rainbow stretching across the horizon when sun and rain combine to make anyone crazy to look at this natural wonder.
Indeed, Dudek at the age of 28 came to his reverence of the sea as giver of life.
Hatto Fischer
Athens 21.2.2004
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Panoply
Sonja A. Skarstedt
November 2003
The galaxy window cracks open:
a strand of stars
greets the sunrise
certain as a tyrant
the desert
a disheveled dustbowl
rises into view
its foreboding erases the stars
whose pandemic light
endures
splinter after splinter
a Tuareg appears out of nowhere
his sandals soft and withered
as his endurance, disturb the silt
on a hardpacked dune
the oasis where his camel slouches
wary
its tattered hide
looped over spindles of bone
the Tuareg extends his chapped hand
to a leafy branch and extracts
a small rough sphere
whose biblical promise to nourish
makes him tremble
for a single monumental
second
he cuts the fruit with the ivory-handled blade
his grandfather bestowed on him
the day he was tall enough to tug the fur
on a camel’s belly
his thrust reveals a pocket
of wet red jewels he hopes
will sustain him through
the blistering hours
of infinite grit and endless days
to come
but before he can lift
the pomegranate feast
to his dry lips
a bullet spins into his ribs
as it tears through him
his mind snaps away
to a fragrant corner of the past
it is my time
intones his mind as if
it has been preparing
for this moment all along
it is my time
the air rushes past him
silica tainted
he meets the sand with all
the force of a whisper
his Tuareg robe billows around him
commemorative as a blue flag
its majestic calm sends
shockwaves
across the pale sepia horizon
as a clockwork formation
of Uncle Sam’s finest
moves out of the oasis shadows
on first inspection the folds
of his face are more leathery
than the shell that holds
the pomegranate whose innards
are still clutched in his right hand
its lifeblood glistens
its seedy scatter spreads
and vanishes into the nearby umber silt
its uneaten fruit is already
drying in the wind as the Tuareg’s
copper hand, already fast asleep
lets go of the awareness that
it will never again trace
his granddaughter’s face
his torso resonates serenity
its feet freed from pebbly jags
and burning parches are already
pondering cool cirrus, far removed
from the pulverizing burden
of life, its tapestry of fissures
those caustic spokes of repetition
birth death battle.
The Blue People carry their brother away
bury with him the lie of no more revolutions
and other promises whose only reprieve
comes in particles of cartilage
and complacency.
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Jack moon
by Mary Lathrop
The sun is beginning to rise.
I sit in the corner chair,
leaning against my Turkish pillow,
looking out the eastern window.
The sky pinks above the gray cut of the mountains
and the dark traces of cloud
catch fire from the first, far-distant light.
A planet -- (which one? Jupiter? Venus? somebody should know this!)
shines gold in the last dark blue moment of the night sky,
then blinks itself away into the dawn.
Last evening I sat in this same spot,
in this same chair,
against this same Turkish pillow,
while this same, exact sun now rising, set.
I couldn’t see it, of course, the sun.
It was hidden behind my house,
behind my neighbor’s house,
behind all the hills and houses in the west.
But before me, the whole line of the horizon was blooming
and in the eastern sky
a fat, November moon
rose translucent, big as hope.
I named it Jack. Jack Moon.
I will live two lives today. I will live
my regular life. The one in which I
call to make an appointment with the eye doctor,
make a second pot of coffee in the afternoon,
kiss my husband goodnight and maybe make love.
But I will live a second life today, a second life
that will also be real. A life in which
Jack Moon and I go everywhere together.
“Oh look, Jack,” I’ll say as a V of geese fly south,
and Jack will answer, “Yes.”
Then later, when we’re driving in the car,
Jack will whisper, “Please, go this way,”
and I will take a new road
to somewhere I’ve never been,
because Jack Moon asked me to,
and it pleases me to please him.
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closure
by Charis Vlavianos
1.
The night was falling
and falling
the voice talking
kept lowering
until it totally faded away.
Did the lines, I wonder, still exist?
The lines (that he had written for her)
outside the voice?
2.
“Not yet and still yes”
he responded.
He himself a dream in a dream.
The brightness of the scintillating transparency
no longer invoked the bygone sobs of reality.
The absence has been transformed into
a pure form
an impermeable nakedness of form.
3.
That was the ultimate quietude?
Nothing called him any longer.
Nothing could call him.
But the voice in the dream…
the already consummated.
(Once, one time,
he felt it, he must have felt it,
the passion for poetry
the desire to air this invisible breath.)
4.
…for love is a preparation,
expectancy,
a creative presence of mind:
“not yet and still yes”
Then.
Certainly.
In the first ιclat
when the need to give shape to its deepest form
still made sense.
How about then?
“…a life of erroneous disavowals
untimely farewells,
a life loaded with the fear
of the inevitable despair”.
Now that he has reached the limit,
that the adolescent arrogance
--the terrifying arrogance of ignorance—
has disguised into inadequacy
condemned to certain failure?
(Peacefully spreading
before him the sea at that very moment
and the secret time of life
was flowing again through his veins.)
5.
“Hang on to me
hang on to me
to hang on to time.”
(In the darkness
her hand loomed
to cover his mouth before)
6.
The bitter
seductive game with the words*
always chiseling
again and again.
If only he could
begin again
from the beginning
go back to summer of 1980
when the poem
still was
before knowledge.
7.
“Harmony must
necessarily,
despite everything accomplished
in favor of beauty,
must remain
captive of nothing,
is condemned
to serve the nothing
for reality avenges life
has to avenge life
through the poem that celebrates it”
(He knew so
yet he believed that he could
find within its rifts
the definite metaphor of death.)
8.
The end.
Everything has ended.
Gone is that innocence
(“so attractive in those years”)
that kept him bound to useless knowledge.
Its unmeasured song has died out.
The voice will succumb to the will.
(…they were lying
and through the window were looking silently at the moon
sliding down the black frame.
They knew...) (so did the night)
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the stone with the "y"
by Socrates Kabouropoulos
Negligent where you
ready to step on any decision
that would open you wide to the world.
Whatever counts whatever doesn’t
you caressed about the slow ripening
of July fruit
or the little things traveling birds
might bring you.
In the middle of summer
unintended, one night
I drove you off the
negligent path
showing you the stone with my ‘Yin’.
“This is a precious stone; my ‘Yang’
is curved on it”, you said.
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